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The Fire Burns
Poems
Aug 2019
Concerted Feelings
Heads bobbing,
to music loud,
vape smoke hangs,
above the crowd.
The main stage rocks,
loud country songs,
the concert is great,
but never lasts long.
Girls on shoulders,
letting bras fly,
singer covers,
Wheel in the Sky.
An original song,
sad and sincere,
followed by one,
about drinking beer.
Melody of emotions,
ups and downs,
the speakers pump,
out the sounds.
A final cover,
everyone knows,
the crowd sings,
to close the show.
Written by
The Fire Burns
M/Artesia, NM
(M/Artesia, NM)
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