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Tin Man

In a land beyond the rainbow

Stands a dark decrepit wood

Where monkeys glide between the branches

And witches live, both bad and good

 

There within its tangled branches

Lies a path bedecked with gold

Leading brave souls who do not blanch

On to wonders yet untold

 

Near this path of yellow mortar

Stands an ancient half hewn tree

Missing wood, about a quarter

Standing **** for all to see

 

In this wood there stands a hatchet

Once beloved, now fraught with rage

Just another rusted gadget

Cast by in the wake of age

 

On a gnarled and twisted root

Centered in a mushroom ring

Stands ***** a metal figure

Frozen ever in mid-swing

 

There he stands through frozen winters

There he stands through summer's heat

There he stands through April showers

Standing ever on his feet

 

Once he glowed a gentle pewter

Once he moved with solemn grace

Lines of rust bedeck his figure

Streaking slowly down his face

 

Once he stood a man of flesh

A simple hewer of the wood

Who held a cabin near the creek

And loved a maiden fair and good

 

In the village near the forest

There he sought to win her hand

A debt of love he'd pay with interest

If beside his side she'd stand

 

In the woods he sought the bride price

Needed to start their new life

In the trees he found the journey

Soon to be defined by strife

 

By an elm his axehead sundered

Cleaving cruelly through his arm

Through the boughs his loud cry thundered

To the heavens in alarm

 

To the ground his lost arm plopped

Landing softly with a thump

To the town the woodsmen hopped

Grasping at the ****** stump

 

There he found the village tinker

And roused him roughly from his bed

Dragging him out to the workshop

Leaking out a wake of red

 

There he begged the wizened workman

'Make a new arm from your cans

For i marry in a fortnight

Let my bride take a whole man'

 

So the old man plied his trade

To make a limb of springs and gears

Twisting tendons in a braid

To move his fingers through the years

 

Now renewed to former vigor

The Woodsman went back to his trade

Returning to the morning's rigor

Back into the ancient glade

 

Little did the doughty hewer

Know his axe contained a curse

Stricken on unknowing users

Causing their limbs to disperse

 

By an oak he lost his left ear

By a beech he lost the right

Hazel took him down a peg

And by a yew he lost his sight

 

Through the week the tinker labored

On in a rush to replace

Just enough of the woodcutter

To accept his bride's embrace

 

On the day his nuptials dawned

The woodsman clanged into the square

Passing through the crowd with awe

On to meet his maiden fair

 

There she stood beneath a trellis

Sky blue ribbons through her braids

Oh, she was a sight to rellish

Worth the trial of the glades

 

There he stood forever altered

A shadow of the former man

In this form forever haltered

To this shell of springs and cans

 

The cutter broke into a dash

To wrap his woman in his arms

On the cobbles his feet clashed

Causing her no small alarm

 

From the altar his bride fled

With screams of terror in her wake

On the day  he should have wed

Became the day his heart did break

 

Suddenly devoid of purpose

To the copse the woodsman flees

Never ere' again to surface

From the shelter of the trees

 

Months went by the woodsman toiled

Day and night, no pause to sleep

Day and night his kettle boiled

Over with the urge to weep

 

Till the sound of April thunder

Rumbled in the cutters ears

Bringing rain that tore assunder

Dams he'd built around his tears

 

So between his swings he wept

Of loss and of abandoned trust

Trails of tears in his joints crept

And hardened slowly into rust

 

Now he stands in frozen duty

Saplings rising all around

Dreaming of an ancient beauty

Long surrendered to the ground

 

Till the day another maid

Returns to bathe his limbs in oil

On that day he'll leave the glade

Moving on to other toils

 

Then the rust begins to part

Then the magic starts to slake

Then the woodsman finds his heart

Then the Tin Man starts to wake

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