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You say, I say

You say, "Time erases all to dust,                  Water turns all to rust." "You are wrong" I say. You say, "Time will one day dissipate                    even the sun, bacteria in the                   water turns all to rust." "You are wrong today and always," I say. You say, "What are you going on about?" I notice your lip tremble as you weaken with doubt. "I am not going to riddle or ridicule you, "I say. You say," Then what is your arguing about?" "Water can rust only metal or wash away stuff, there is no rust on plastic or glass or wood," I say. You say, "Okay, you may have a point, but ...", you pause in thought, then go on, " more than rust, oxidization happens to all!" "Generalizations are weak with holes," I say and then "God will end it all when He calls all home." I say as well. You say nothing, thinking looking up at the sky. "He is time, He is love, He is near more than above, He cleanses with water and turns it into wine, He is the Divine." I say. You say," Fine, I know this too, but everything." "In the beginning God,.." I say. With that we say no more but run off to grab our hockey sticks, "I'll be Parent, you'll be Orr," I say. You say, "He shoots, he scores." "Let's play some more," I say, "we will be called in for dinner soon, we don't have much time left before the sun sets and leaves us in shadow with the lights on the street." You say, "We would play till dawn, if they let us." "You are right as always, " I say to make sure I get in the last word. ©DWE032013
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darrell-wade-elverum
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darrell-wade-elverum
Canadian
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Mar 17, 2013
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A conversation among two friends, long ago.

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