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Unconscious

Unconsciously

Tears came falling to my pillow

From the deep abyss of the human eye

Drawn from my brain

released from the untapped depths of my soul

Like rain on the windowsil

A formulation of clouds turning into precipitation

Falling to the ground

Finally released

From the Ruler of the Universe

Reminding us all to

just

give

in

and

let

it

out.

to simply

 

surrender.

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Published
May 9, 2010
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