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A Thomas Hawkins
Poems
May 2010
Sound vs look
If poetry is art, then what form should it take?
Is ignoring things like layout the cause of my mistake.
You see to me a poem should be heard before its seen
Its an audio based art form, using sound to express its theme
So when I write my poems, and lay them on the page
I do so as if they're spoken by an actor on a stage.
Now I see some other poets, who lay it out so pretty
But when I try and read it, its disjointed and bitty
So again I ask my question, if your poems meant to rhyme
should you really break your verses in the middle of a line?
See I don't only write poetry, I like to read it too
so when a layout trips me up, I want to say to you
Why do that your reader, why get them on that train
only to pull the cord and get them off and on again
A poem is a journey, I should sit back and take a ride
not trip and stumble frequently over messages you hide.
So next time you write a poem, with more focus on the look
Go down to library and get a calli-graphy book.
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A Thomas Hawkins
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