Six or seven women ranging from thirty to sixty stand chit-chatting in a somewhat-circle outside the State House. Slowly, they dry their skin and dye their hair in the smoky sunlight of the morning break; taking their time off with each long pull and curl.
A light skinned black woman dressed in navy sweater and pinned with power star speaks to the group. Deep inside her lungs a road is being paved.
You can hear the tremble of the rollers flattening molten pavement, the rumble of the endless packs of 100s of dump trucks the wisp and rasp of steam, the cough and hack of working men who’ve spent too much time paving roads.
I have never heard anyone say a word in the way that woman said that word this morning. What was her tone? Condemning?
In her blue commando, she pointed right at me (without ever seeing me) and said, “Us and our cigarettes...”
2cd or 3rd draft. what do you think about the ending? keep going?