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Donall Dempsey
Poems
Apr 2019
THE SAXOPHONE GOING CRAZY
THE SAXOPHONE GOING CRAZY
the smoke appears
to fall up
to the ceiling and then
languidly down blue
it dances to
the shiny saxophone
as if it drunk in
jazz
the cigarette smoke
music made visible
here it is
a spiral staircase
the going up and going down
the one and the same
now here a dissolving double
helix
now again a sudden sketch
of how naked
we will come
to be
entwined with the music
with bodies of smoke
the making and un-making
of us
our laughter and words
floating up to the ceiling
frozen in the air
clinging there for all to see
our love written
in music and smoke
the saxophone going
crazy
Written by
Donall Dempsey
Guildford
(Guildford)
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