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Feb 2013
You exist in the world, as perfect
as harmonies combine connected,
radiating the ultimate tune projected.

A being inimitable; glowing on the inside
with beams linked to the sun direct:
You exist in the world, as perfect
as harmonies combine connected.

Performing all gifts effortlessly with pride,
showcasing the vast amount of intellect;
remaining on the truest path, with respect.
You exist in the world, as perfect
as harmonies combine connected,
radiating the ultimate tune projected.
Attempting to write something for my boyfriend ... totally struggling with the last stanza - any suggestions?
It is supposed to be in the form of a roundel, but I mixed up the rhyme scheme.
Khrystle Rea
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