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Donall Dempsey
Poems
Mar 2019
SWIMMING THROUGH EARTH
SWIMMING THROUGH EARTH
There was a loud
silence.
Fred was dead.
Busy swimming through
earth.
He was doing the front crawl.
Which was surprising as he
couldn't swim.
Our Jim could swim.
But me and Fred - never.
But here he was
swimming through earth.
With only half a face.
The other half was just blood.
His one eye
wide open.
As if eternity
had appeared in front of him.
When the bomb blew
the world to smithereens
I believed I was dead
too.
But I wasn't.
More's the pity.
What was death like
you ask.
it was like...
It was like. . .
nothing.
Being nothing.
Then it was like
my mother's perfume.
And there she was
recreated by lilacs..
A perfume version of her
carved out of the air.
I swear.
Everything went white.
It was as if the world
had been erased.
Then the earthandtreesandfields
rushed back into my eyes.
As if there were in a hurry
and could only exist in
my seeing
them.
That's when I seen our Fred
already half buried
swimming through the earth
as if he thought he could have
made it
the poor wee ******.
A nicer lad there
wasn't.
I would have cried
if there were tears.
But there were
no tears.
No tears.
I was furious I had
survived.
Then I thought
just casual like.
"This should get me back
to Blighty like!"
When they found me
("Hey this one's still alive!")
I was trying to swim
through the earth.
"Hang on Fred!" I said.
"I'm coming.
Written by
Donall Dempsey
Guildford
(Guildford)
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