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My breath raggedly escapes my lips

as I let out a fierce battle cry.

I’m being pushed, shoved, and punched

while my heart pulses to the beat of the music.

 

My hairspray is glue,

and my hair is now an octopus, clinging to my face.

Everyone’s body heat creates

a sweltering pocket; and I am in a sauna,

moist with sweat that isn’t mine.

 

The quick tempo of the bass

penetrates everything and everyone,

and suddenly the crowd is one

hot, sweaty, throbbing mass.

How beautiful it is.

 

Suddenly there is pain and light,

and a fist pulls away from my face.

My eye stings, but adrenaline pumps through me

rather than blood, and I am invincible.

 

Someone picks me up, and I am on top.

Crowd surfing, above everyone.

No one can bring me down,

because here I am free.

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maddy-tidrick
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Feb 8, 2013
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