I used to smile I used to laugh And I used to love Now the only thing I feel is pain I can't smile I can't laugh But I can cry And I'm ready to give up I'm ready to let it all go Why...? They ask but never listen Why...? You don't really care Why...? Because I've been through bad times I've been to hell and back Now I can't stand anymore But It doesn't matter Because No one sees my suffering So no one can help
I'm not as experienced as the rest of people here, and I've been looking for feedback on my writing. This isn't my best work so I would love fedback.