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Love poem no 1

She lay in his bed Scenes of tunnels & trains & thoughts of trite moosh run through her head when young she saw him different with a quiff & a whiff of CK on levis & a watch with LED lights & a t-shirt blue, skin tight but with fashion aside her passion subsides when he enters not so gently, did not test the waters did not guess it was low tide During the evening they danced They got down to steady trance But now it seems he’s in free time A strange rhythm, so contrived He doesn’t look like he knows it Doesn’t seem like type To quote ornette coleman In the dark of the night He has the feel of squashed fruit And the thwack of a wet sock Flooped out like misplaced steps Of a horse learning to walk The night entertainment then, Condemned to an eye on a clock Whilst sharing sweaty absorbence & not at all evenly proportioned the most obtuse solos are always too long and if made into a duet it’s just awkward & wrong one face polite as one face holds strong held strong in the notion it is the king of this realm, his own like a deluded ****** rock star with an out of tune guitar & a confused young groupie rebelling against her ma & pa in the end he doesn’t sell it rather he gives it away & she is obliged to take it to carry on the shared charade a feeble dance of pretence not to shatter the held façade of a bullied masculinity of a young boy fully charged of a girl swooned by a conman albeit not well disguised she convinced herself a prince of sorts fit to break past her royal guard she leaves bored & unfulfilled while he sleeps sound & proud her dreaming of a prince she’ll soon meet with a better sense of time
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aj-robertson
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Jan 25, 2013
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