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Trouble In Paradise

by @breanna-evans

baby all I wanna do is try and get along with you why do we have to fuss and fight? can't figure out, it's just not right I know I slept in kinda late I'm sorry, I don't feel so great I'm trying to change the way I feel but you just don't see the appeal I can't be still, I can't be lazy and you look at me like I'm crazy or worse, like it's some kind of crime to build myself and kill some time I'm sorry that I can't sit still it's just the way I have to deal I go too far, I get obsessed but if I don't, I get depressed at least, if I work out a bit I won't feel like a piece of shit lie to myself, at least that way I had a good, productive day and if I went to meditate at least, I got my thinking straight but with all this, you're just annoyed with everything that brings me joy can we start over? baby, please I love you I don't wanna leave but when you start to act this way it really pushes me away can't play guitar, can't take a pee without you finding fault with me and that's just how you make me feel I gotta doubt if you're for real so tell me, baby what did I do? I'm trying so hard to get along with you don't wanna go, I wanna stay, but I feel like we need some space to meditate, to cook and clean, to work off nervous energy why does it have to cause a fight? and cut into my sleep at night?
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breanna-evans
25 / F / West Virginia
Published
Jan 20, 2019
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my anxiety, ADHD, and bipolar are all fucking with me at the same time today. Sorry if I'm getting on your nerves, I'm really trying to get my shit together.

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