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Lost comrades

Life is a War, each-day a battle,

kissed by the shell, tied under chain that rattle.

In this journey of nirvana,

we meet many souls shaping our karma.

These words i Salute to my comrade's name,

never knew where they went, nor from where they came.

 

Unknown, unheard, unseen one day, they creep,

lighten up your days, givin peace while you sleep.

O' lost comrades where did you go,

i reap my fruit, from the plant i did sow.

you gave me light, nourished my flight,

gave me a meaning , took me to height.

Never gave a chance,

to thank you once,

you've been the star to my moonless nights.

I never got you name,

but I've never been the same.

weird you may call, for the stranger I've known,

cleared my dark, showed me the dawn.

It wasn't for a day, month, or year,

they stay a few moments, yet seem so dear.

you may be away, may forget my name,

but to be o'nest i'll never forget your flame.

You showed me path, my destiny, my aim,

without you my friend, it'll never be the same.

These words i salute to my comrade's name,

never knew where they went, nor from where they came.

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sudhansu
Indian
Published
Jan 20, 2013
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