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Pensive Poignant Poetry
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Jan 2019
The meadow
The meadow was that of much beyond compare
Outlined by a blue line that cut off the air
Hardest soft brown eyes that set off a flare
The heat was worth being exactly right there
My Reason and Sense, the water did not spare
Until the sun set, and left the land all bare
Left me with nothing but at darkness to stare
And building wishes for the curtain to tear
But the Moon had risen, with luring brightness
Gave light to the water: then full with darkness
A colorful face crafted with such finesse
Such a light through my black; I could not wish less
Finite or not; loved the feeling regardless
But I was cursed at the same time I was blessed
Moons don't always shine, and it caused my great stress
So I parted the Moon, which I think it best
I'm thankful it had been there, nevertheless
I parted the Moon; the sun began to rise
And so did the flutter of the butterflies
And heated that which could have turned into ice
Roses in a field that was soaked in gold dye
Like the hue of the sun that flew through the sky
But I've forgot the joy I feel when I fly
And now I wonder, "Should I even try?"
'Cause each Day just leaves me with tears I can't cry
October 23, 2018
I tell the story of my past relations with love (or crushes) and the current one.
I particularly and personally thought the ending was spot-on.
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