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Pensive Poignant Poetry
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Jan 2019
Did you notice
Did you notice the sky was gray?
Did you notice their shoes today?
Did you notice those old rocks?
Did you notice your own thoughts?
Do you notice the wind in you hair?
Did you notice the birds over there?
Did you notice how you smile?
Did you notice your clothing style?
Did you notice the apple tree?
Did you notice the grass was green?
Did you notice the teacher's pants?
Did you notice the minute hand?
Did you notice the shade of their eyes?
Did you notice how you cry?
Did you notice the cleaning staff?
Did you notice your neighbor's laugh?
Did you notice?
September 25, 2018
I present the many things people overlook in their busy lives.
This was not my favorite poem I had ever written, mainly because it seemed overly repetitive and awkward.
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