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My First Storm

by @luisidek

it feels like thunder the first time always feels that way he takes me in his hands and i melt my body is overheating i try to suppress my pleasure i'm afraid to make a sound   he kisses me his lips are hot to the touch everything about this is burning sweat drips from our skin his hands are holding mine and im lost im feeling everything im feeling pleasure the thunder booms and i yelp and pant then lighting strikes it blooms all around us it raises the hair on our skin it flashes so quickly i begin to relax i feel warmth all over me the rain begins to fall and he lays beside me i grab his hands and kiss his palms the rain softens and he pulls me closer only he can create a storm inside my body
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Written by
luisidek
20 / M / Hays Ks
For You?
Written by
luisidek
20 / M / Hays Ks
Published
Dec 27, 2018
Time
2m
Notes

A tribute to the first time.

Tags
#virginity#virgin#love#lover#rain#thunder#storm#poem
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