I dripped down the rafters into chaos and frolicking fantasies roar. Fare well to the redhead queens! I sat back in chiseled thrones and threw gold at the gods and still no answer was given for my offerings. The night was thick on my breath, bitter broke *** liquor stained my body. My blood runs thin. My trip throws me deep where the flames lick sweat from my face.
This is an old one, from 6th or 7th grade. Not sure how much I like it. Opinions?