Faster Striking, lashing, dashing His blade against mine Lives at stake Not mine, not mine It must be him Faster I strike, he parries, I strike again It goes through A flash of red A gasp of air Not his Mine No! Faster Weakening, faltering He strikes and strikes Move! I canβt I canβt Rushing, rushing Blood to my head, to my side Blurring, rushing Parry! Riposte! No! Again Again Faster Blade to blade Clashing, biting Rushing, rushing Parry! Riposte! Stop! Time slows Rushing, rushing Unmoving My blade, his His blade Downward His throat Faster! I slash He stabs Scarlet droplets fly Pain Pain My blade in his throat His in my chest Pain Darkness Nothing
I'm intending this for some kind of performative poetry, perhaps slam poetry This was originally a small piece of impromptu writing I did. I would love some criticism
The original is here: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/86216/version/163138