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09.31.2018 were I to have ventured further

by deadboycreek

i go in too far and too loud; i see the train of thought it could take me where no one else could go further and further where they make more sense the last final logical conclusion and yet so far in from a distance i am a madman too far in to comprehend oh were i to have ventured further if i had followed through with every spasm of great and holy ideas, what pleasures unknown called them up had it sorted; it was 2 or 3 a.m i don't know what i was thinking i mean i was thinking i needed to be touched i was thinking i was needing to be fucked i mean i was thinking i needed to be reduced to air, to be made to be nothing, i am nothing its always 2 or 3 a.m. i am made to want to feel nothing went to bed in a cloud of sheltered, painless oblivion i go too far and too loud and it is never nearly enough; I See The Liquid Sphere Waltz, oh i must tread so carefully and lightly for i am always on the verge of something i will not be able to redeem i care about no one i care about me that i may slip into something i cannot relinquish
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deadboycreek
22 / Non-binary / mérida, yucatán
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Written by
deadboycreek
22 / Non-binary / mérida, yucatán
Published
Sep 30, 2018
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2m
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3:27 AM Sunday September 31st 2018

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