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Asleep

by PhoenixesPoems

His eyes cloudy grey Storms clouds once, tired now Breathes like sand bags Heavy and damp Slowly holding in a flood Ragdoll in the wind He falls, limp and lost I hold- til sleep
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The Stars, Outer space
Published
Sep 2, 2018
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Inspiration- 'Asleep' by the Smiths (https://youtu.be/6dPGV0cols4)

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