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the outer ring

by SoZaka

A life lived in a dream if ever a heavenly sight could bring me to stir asleep on a plume of Neptune dimensions away from here of three eyes of which I see not one sees through my confusion too dense a haze surrounds me to spot the closest star much less the farthest one away
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Written by
SoZaka
M / Seattle
Published
Aug 28, 2018
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1m
Tags
#neptune#fantasy#illusion#imagination#confusion#distant
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