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Underneath the surface

And mind you, this is true of everyone

Lies something far more interesting

Much more intriguing

And often darker than anything you can see

 

Take a girl

She's pretty, has a smile on her face

Laughs and flirts and teaser her way through the day

But alone, she is wreck

A mess of self hatred and bitterness

Waging a war on her body

 

Take a boy

He's tall, handsome, strong

A stud athlete, a great character kid

The kind of son you want your child to grow up to be

Yet on the inside he is miserable

Dad's a drunk with a temper

Mom left years ago

And he blames himself every moment for that

Wishing he wasn't alive

 

Take a woman

She works hard, with kids and a job

The children are smart, well mannered

They'd make any mother proud, and they are her pride and joy

But her husband is always gone on business

And the pain is too much to bear

So she turns to the pills that make her forget

The pills that came to run her life

 

Take a man

Wealthy, successful

Straight laced and out spoken, climbing that corporate ladder

A bachelor, and everyone assumes its by choice

H chose career over family and thrived

Or so they think

But little do they know he has a secret

A wife isn't exactly his style

He loves another man, who hates him for it

So he throws himself into his work

Until his fire had died, and he is burnt out

 

On the surface, success is a wonderful guise

For all the pain we bury inside

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daniel-kenneth
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Nov 21, 2012
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