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Producing Needles For Your Dislike

small insignificant needles

unnoticed and unseen

by the numerous people

gathered in these square feet

happening again and again

these needles compile

stacking themselves

neatly in my pocket

plucking them from air

only comprehended

by me and your silent rejections

 

when the time has come

and enough needles

have been gathered

i aimlessly read the clock

and make my way

out of the place

parting myself from

the unknowing numerous people

 

driving home

struck between the wheel

and the sad words

created by the speakers

i begin the painful process

of letting the needles

jab my heart

each one confusing me more

 

arriving home

switching myself

from sitting to standing

i feel the needles sting

a pain

I'll feel till tomorrow

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Written by
dan-pramann
Published
Mar 27, 2010
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