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Supposing that we lit some candles..

Supposing that we lit some candles.

One for each person on this earth,

we would blow one out at a funeral

and light one up at a birth.

 

The world would grow darker

every time we lost a fighter

but with every new born baby

it gets just that bit brighter.

 

If you travelled into a city that was dark and gritty

you'd know that they didn't have many in their committee.

But.. If the light was brilliant and bright

it would send a beaming message throughout the night.

 

Saying "We are here! And we are alive!"

Not wanting to be alone we endeavor to collide

and form one giant, shining beacon

that burns so fierce we're sure it can't weaken

 

We sparkle and crackle and bend nature to our whim

the mighty fire so strong it just had to gave in.

With it we forged iron and buildings, cars and computers

and lit paths of lives to guide commuters

 

We lit up the universe as far as we could see

Improving our lives greatly with technology

obsessed with our professed fixture on practicality

we completely forgot about morality

 

Our fires forged weapons which we aimed next door

In one swift movement we saw the effects of war

6,000,000 candles extinguished

over arguments on which light is most distinguished

 

So fixated on this light we blinded our eyes

and the candle smoke filled the skies.

We thought candles were good, they elevated us higher

but now all we have is thick smoke and fire.

 

The fire consuming all in its route

the root of our lives follow suite.

It's eating the oxygen and burning the grass

the sand is melting and forming to glass.

 

The glass it shatters into a thousand pieces

more candles are lighting, the temperature increases

The resources decline, as do the candles

buried in ash a hundred thousand scandals.

 

Now only a few lit candles remain

as they slowly melt and fade away.

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Written by
duck
English
Published
Nov 8, 2012
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