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Jun 2018
I take a leap
Walk through the green
Upon the cluster
Of willows never seen

Silent.
Untouched.
Captured.

A frozen moment of the past
Leaves us waiting for more
Time stopped
But life keeps moving

The darkness overwhelming
The nature filling my gaze
A memory in my hand
Can i get some constructive criticism on this please? Thanks!
Written by
Steph Cash  14/F
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