He lets go of her hand, his hungry eyes - wanting to trap her image in them forever - look at her desperately, wanting her to read them. The silence between them, pregnant with unspoken words, becomes too dense for him to breathe. His mind goes numb. He tears his eyes away from her and turns to walk away... ...the wind lashes against his face, as the coldness of their parting bites into his heart.
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She felt the warmth leave her hand as he drew his, away from her ; her tears held back in quiet dignity. The detached smile decieved words wanting to touch her lips. She looked away from him lest, her eyes gave her away. Bearing a resigned look, watching him walk away, her eyes silently call out...
Akka, I was thinking about the different formats ( http://hellopoetry.com/poem/a-complimentary-complaint/ ) in which you write poems....just wanted to say I love them. Your poems speak through the style in which you write them.