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A Caramel Double

"I like my fire white hot

and my skin ice cold."

She talked at me crookedly

as she red-marked the rim

of the scotch glass.

The smokey haze almost masked

what she didn't want hidden.

"I like extremes, polarities, you know...

moving towards them,

pushing too far in a direction

to remove the possibility of return."

Clink-to-coaster.

*** oozed out in crescent-circles,

"I like you."

 

Her eyes were bloodshot brown,

all that caramel whiskey sweetness.

She had it in her:

all that passion, that lust,

that cruelty to never call again.

Her marked stiletto against my thigh

under that lonely spilled table

spoke volumes more

than her sideways looks.

 

Although I said nothing,

I had it in me too.

We'd connected.

I liked that

she lived

like that.

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joseph-valle
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Published
Oct 10, 2012
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