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At the Root of Nightmares

Seventeen, Seventeen, Glean the knowledge from the scene; A tale written, read before, Something's wrong, but something more -- Fear the nightmare, fear the dream, Nothing stops at this machine; Grasping rule yet leading blind, Law will bind no bleeding mind Intent on death, and peddled lines Stray from course to fell the fruits, As Red Rum seeps through poisoned roots. Mockingbird, mockingbird, Tell me all the things you've heard... They don't like it, so I like it, I am like the mockingbird.
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EveEstelle
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Mar 26, 2018
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*Last stanza is meant to be italicized

This is sort of one of those feels-like-a-first-draft pieces, but I'm going to leave it alone for a while. If there are any parts that stand out to you as needing improvement, please don't hesitate to mention them!! Thank you!

[This poem covers some controversial aspects of the recent gun debates in the US, and expresses my personal views. You might not agree with me here, and that's perfectly fine. In fact, I encourage you to voice your own thoughts and opinions below, assuming we can all remain civil.

All sides have valid points to make on this issue. That's why it's such a difficult problem to solve. But discussion is good... Discussion is necessary. Constructive debate is the fuel for forward progress.]

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#misc#society#controversial#gun#debate#root#cause#nightmare#rhyme#tragedy
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