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the soldier

the soldier knelt to fix his cap, dug deep into trenches, he stopped. amidst the shots, he reached for the map if not in his pocket, it’s lost. “it seems like we’ve been here for years” the man beside him squawked. *“an hour seems like many days, because we’ve gotten so lost.”* unsure of quite how to respond, the soldier raised his brow but as he was about to speak, the man who’d spoken went down. the soldier raised his head to see the great alsace-lorraine. the war had raged for far too long, and so he contrived an escape. he planned to sneak across the flank, advance the trench on his own but as he stood to make his break, his heart sank quite gut-wrenchingly low. he thought to himself in a humble tone, “i can’t do this alone.” although his intentions were clearly courageous, his weakness truly had shown. as lady luck would have her way, the days kept withering by as the soldier so fervent to capture this land tried not to keep track of the time. they advanced to the east, but to their dismay the french would push them right back and until a day they’d find a way, the men had no way to attack. a fateful storm rolled in one day, a blanket of snow o’er the field and the mood of both great war machines, had slowly came to a yield. the soldier, so tired of the weight of the war climbed out, with a fire in his eye. he raised his rifle high in the air and cried “Deutschland über alles” the soldier then fell onto his knees, and raised his hands to the the sky not seconds passed before the scream as snow and french bullets did fly. the soldier was struck right through his lung and grasped his chest to breathe but all could see his head was hung as the soldier collapsed from his knees. there was no escape, he said to himself as the snow slowly blurred into light and he passed away on the holy ground and they never did win that fight.
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Written by
dalton-bauder
American
Published
Oct 5, 2012
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This is the the heaviest allegory i've ever written.

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