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Mar 2010
inside this swirling amniotic fluid
i bob around
like words in a pool of thought
waiting for the moment of release.

outside is tumult
and the chaotic murmur of
muffled voices--some loving,
others harsh and threatening.

fostered by this lifeline
and fettered by it,
i feel cocooned here
and in equal measure, smothered.

i kick around in glee and anger,
not quite sure what is what
but as each moment passes,
my restlessness grows with me.

nurturing me with selfless love,
protecting me from the unknown,
is this nourishing womb of attachment,
this prison of my dreams...

what lies out there i know not
nor even what destiny has decreed
but what i do know for certain
is that i want to break free!
AUTHOR'S NOTE:this poem was originally titled 'the foetus', and it met with general approval from several readers. my attempt was, however not to portray a foetus, but an individual who wants to run away from it all...my feeling is that the original title was misleading. i feel the title "the prisoner" is a better one. what is your opinion?
anilkumar parat
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anilkumar parat  61/M/Kerala, India
(61/M/Kerala, India)   
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