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A BATHTIME 1997

by @TerryCollett

Bernice turned in the bath: Ariadne was watching her every movement. The red hair once cropped short, had now grown long again, the eyes peered at her tiger-like. Do you have to stare at me? Bernice said. No, I don't have to, but I like to. She continued to wash herself aware that Ariadne was still peering. You can wash my back if you must watch, she said. Ariadne took the sponge and began to soap Bernice's back. Like being a child again, Bernice said, like when my mother used to do when I was little. Ariadne sponged gently, over the back and under the arms and down the ribs and around the front. I can do that area, Bernice said. So can I, Ariadne said. She sponged. Bernice sat there childlike bemused. Didn't your mother bath you when you were a child? Bernice said. No, she Ariadne, I had to hurry up and not take so long, or she'd hit the back of my legs with a wet hand. She never mentioned her father; Bernice knew that was taboo. She handed the sponge back to Bernice. There you are, job done. Shame, I was beginning to enjoy that, Bernice said. Ariadne smiled. Anytime and anything to obliged. She left the bathroom. Bernice finished off the bathing. Her mother had to be bathed herself now since the crippling disease. She sighed. She got out of the bath and stood drying herself with a towel. Some days she wished her mother was well enough to bath herself somehow.
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Mar 12, 2018
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