I walk along the path of you and me And find what once we carved'n mahogany So small and deep that only I can see What's ours among the lies an'disloyalty. The tree he stands, weathered, washed up, and strong; A testament to love so young n'impure - Each dent is proof of lust declared for long By youth enamored far err they grow, mature. Ours too, is there, cut deep into the bark. The 'L . plus J.' hidden among the many, whose hopeless love required assurance - that mark to keep their ferv'r from fall to worth a-penny But hark, my dear, I hope our mark does fade For ours, in heart, trumps any a-tree has made.
Alternate Couplet: But see, my dear, our mark is not like theirs Not short, nor weak we always will be pairs
Let me know which one is better! I struggled with the ending for a long time.