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The painted women

by caroline-ward

I feel like an unfinished painting A portrait of a woman The figure without a name. I am always A nearly masterpiece, The unfinished sequel to An artist's best work. Critics will consider My half shaded eyes And sheer, lifeless hair From too little paint strokes Or careful pressure of a pencil A pity. They will declare that I Could have been a showpiece And won awards Maybe they will ask Why I was never completed But know not to push the matter As not to upset the artist. Instead I am shut up in an attic A dustsheet hiding me from view Maybe I have become Damaged from exposure To sunlight and damp. Maybe I have been forgotten As an unfinished, abandoned project A mark of shame For the genius Whose other works Were a roaring success.
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Mar 5, 2018
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