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Sep 2012
No one can say what it was like (when
we fell in love) before the universe

After the big bang, they say, it inflated
faster than anything ever has

Faster than light

Space ballooned by wild orders of
magnitude, precipitating existence
(your rose petal lips)

It only happened once, this inflation,
then the universe hit its stride

Only once, (when we touch)
but that was all it took for the stars to shine
Playing around quite a bit with parentheses lately, comments on them? A bit of an experimentation inspired by EE Cummings.
Zajan Akia
Written by
Zajan Akia  Long Island, NY
(Long Island, NY)   
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