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And they hardly noticed his presence.

out to the shore, where he saw

|The pier|

rocked gently as moist folds in the ocean swept

|Onto the shore|

floated the consciousness of a thousand men,

|Waterlogged,|

we struggled with our clinging vestments in

|The hours of twilight|

brought with them clarity, along with the tiny, celestial fragments of

|Glassy, marbled light|

dropped, crashing on the table,

|Now broken|

from their moorings, the lanterns floated softly

|On the breeze|

they watched him just as they had a thousand times before, while

|We walked|

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Written by
blair-griffith
American
Published
Sep 25, 2012
Lines·Words
16·85
Notes

Every other line (set off by vertical bars) both ends and begins the previous and following lines, respectively. The reader is encouraged to read the poem as is, rather than repeating each phrase at the beginning of the next line.

The poem is also cyclical in nature.

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