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John the Baptist

Like when they found the chariot

wheels at the bottom of the

Red Sea so was I surprised

at the faint reaching of the

fig tree, clinging to life amidst

so much dust, as it reached

ever upward in an infinite dance,

unaware of its eventual wanweird fate.

But I tracked on, crunching through

the ancient dirt, scrolls strapped

upon my back, coarse leather digging

through my camel's hair robes, sandy

grit forced in the gaps of

my toes. I cracked the locusts

and devoured them, dampening their bitterness

with the sweet warming explosion of

wild honey. So with bound Pleiades

above me, I gave witness to

Jerusalem, saying "After me will come

one more powerful than I, the

thongs of whose sandals I am

not worthy to stoop down and

untie." And I took them into

the Jordan and made them new

men. As the chill waters numbed

their muscles, their hairs pricked up

like gooseflesh, the night echoing with

splashing water and murmured voices. But

slowly the people trickled away, back

to the twang of lutes, their

ladles of soups, and I was

left alone, sitting, contemplating, always waiting.

So I sent forth the ravens,

carrying my message, to meet at

the Brookhollow no matter the obstruction,

to come by wagon or camel,

no matter of rain or flood.

But they were stubborn and prideful,

and would be moved from their

couches probably by no less than

one of Archimedes' great battleship levers,

and even then with massive groaning

like the coarse wooden hulls of

those monolithic ships. Because the sweet

taste of pastries is lodged upon

their tongues, keeping them occupied with

this world instead of the next.

So here I'll stay, always waiting.

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Written by
benjamin-adams
American
Published
Sep 10, 2012
Lines·Words
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Notes

I did this for creative writing class. 6 words per line, with these mandatory things:

5 different sounds

3 different tastes

4 different tactile sensations (i.e. the feel of something against the skin)

A city outside the U.S.

a simple machine

a dessert

a fabric

a celestial body

a communication device

a kitchen utensil

a specific kind of tree

a famous body of water

a kind of shoe

a brief literary quotation from before 1900

a rare or unusual garment (e.g. a cuirass)

a specific kind of bird

a famous scientist (besides Einstein or Stephen Hawking)

an interesting street name from your home town

a piece of furniture

a form of transportation

a rare or unusual word (find one in the dictionary)of fewer than three syllables

an animal

some kind of meteorological phenomenon, i.e. weather

a landmark

a musical instrument

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