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f*** the stars

this is a tale

of two star-crossed lovers

with a love so powerful

they tainted the heavens

with bursts of colours

 

they were never meant to be;

mischievous little kids

finding love in sinful glee

in laughter, between dreams and reality

 

and though it was lawless,

they found solace

because in every prison,

they found a rhyme and a reason

 

but even for a love so great,

they could not escape

the fates’ wrath and envy

 

destiny pulled on their threads

cut them loose, thrusted them into misery;

for their memories were wiped clean,

but feelings remained as strong as they had ever been

 

the boy exiled in a far off land

across the pacific sea

the girl trapped in her need to break free

in a realm both boring and bland

 

ensnared in a labyrinth of woe

the lovers yearned for anything—

for something, for someone,

to obliterate this endless longing

 

the gods answered them

in the form of two loved ones

polished in every edge,

a perfect someone

 

but perfect felt too perfect

and not perfect enough

to fill up the hole

left by a perfectly imperfect

 

until one day the gods whispered

for the winds to push the two

and the birds to tug at their sleeves

over mountain and sea

even through the darkest valley

so their paths would finally meet

 

and so they did.

 

in the flurry of a moment

a pair of brown eyes met

and time was frozen

once more

 

the two stared intently

as if remembering a broken melody

a lost childhood song

branded as a wrong

 

the birds fluttered and flew

taking the cursed red fibre

snipped them in two

and the lovers felt all the lighter

 

it was the girl who spoke first:

**** the stars.

i don’t want perfect,

i want you.”*

 

eyes dazzling, the boy nodded:

*“we’ll invert the universe—

the night sky a blank white

the stars pitch black

the earth moving in reverse”*

 

the fates saw and surrendered

as the stars began to wither

for this love is love

in all its splendor

 

so the lovers walked away with a promise

under their breaths, they both swore:

*“i lost you once,

but nevermore.”*

 

****

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Written by
startlingstars
18 / F / dreamland
Published
Jan 21, 2018
Lines·Words
73·368
Notes

they say no one can rewrite the stars,

so i propose we orchestrate supernovas.

Tags
#destiny#fate#lovers#stars#universe#lost#love#earth#starcrossed
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