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Ellen
Poems
Feb 2018
5/6 of a man
Five senses attracted people in a lighted room
and be one lonely man long I thought
which one I should follow
Wanting my llife to be worth of more likes
I stared at the five senses
wondering which one to please
They say an eye for an eye,
that vision is ideal
but to me vision was blind
The privilege to hear
the lovely melodies of life,
but hearing turned me deaf
The taste of life,
feeling deep the flavor of each experiance
but to me life was tasteless
It is the touch that affects mankind,
a babie's most used sensor
but I only touched rasors
All the beautiful smells in the world,
a fresh flower's beginning
but I ony got to smell the dead ones
Oh,these senses that people follow
vision,hearing,taste,touch and smell
are only to fulfill their materialistic nature
The sixth sense,
the one most misunderstood by mankind
this is the one everyone should follow
The sixth sense,
not instict but a man mind's spirit and persona
a world too small for unmaterialistic virtues.
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