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love's a land mine

by solluna

loving you, is like walking on a landmine; suited with a vest decorated in dangerous explosives one wrong step-                           and it goes 'kaboom', just like ticks of warning from my puny heart                                     you hold a machine                                    and prepared to shoot;                                    as if I've not experienced                                    the after effects of this war, just so I could win, the peace treaty of your affection
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solluna
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Written by
solluna
30 / F
Published
Jan 10, 2018
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1m
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I love comparing love with explosive— both are not safe to be held or toyed around.

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#love#heartbreak#explosive#pain#crush#like#machine#shoot#war#heart
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