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Aug 2012
Don’t look in my direction
I fear you won’t be pleased with what you see
Don’t ask for my opinion
Because I don’t even know what I think of me
Don’t try to draw conclusions
You will never be able to understand the truth
Don’t look for a solution
Because there is no hope in this troubled youth
Give me your honest opinions on my poetry :):) I submitted 2 before and got absolutely no feedback. Sadness. Just want some constructive criticism on them please.
Written by
Sasha
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