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SEEN, UNSUNG

by @caroliner2018

I am drowning next to the sea, with you. Drowning in the crashing wave-sounds, and your voice. The white-bright sky with its sharp birds like spears, sees us: you whispering in my ear and the sea. I am speaking, but my words are crashing, blending with the coursing tide and your words I am caught here, hearing the sea, seeing you. blinded. And my own words drowned, and unheard. Only the sky with its spearhead birds, can know. But they are both helpless, leaving you, me, and the sea Unsung until the last.
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Written by
caroliner2018
F / California
For You?
Written by
caroliner2018
F / California
Published
Dec 29, 2017
Time
1m
Tags
#sea#ocean#waves#silence#love#birds#listen#drown#understand#quiet
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