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Senor Negativo
Poems
Aug 2012
This Valley Saved Me
This valley will save me
Two hands
Oil coated & tender
Fertile
Lush
Energizing queries
Twisted grass tuft
Open, quivering
Hope & purity
It’s our time
You said
Answered prayers
& symbols etched
Released whispers
Revelation of lies,
Truths overcome.
Here in the valley,
Lost in my labors
Commiserating with the Devil after his fall
Denying the mountains security
I found disorder
Muddied my spirit
Grabbed tight
It’s time you said
Leading me out
Dark tent and a roaring blaze
With you,
This valley saved me.
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