not given much to metaphor as fact the student struggles to relate her tale each sentence on its own will sag or fail the effort turns out bloated not compact her model is the sermon and the tract and writing comes to her like time in gaol the style is cold the images are stale and the whole enterprise with pain is packed the reader wants so much to go outside and take his whirling thoughts for a long walk but finishing the job is all his pride so from the horrid task he dare not balk no leave nor yet excuse he has to plead so the next essay he picks up to read