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Finding My Way To You

by @kriskaia

eye to eye feet to feet, my colored eye visions eclipse, my ideas are visions placed ideas in you, my ideas I placed plateau here, stand still people plateau see my water run, I cannot bear see ken I matter, as my core can not know feet on the floor, gravity holds my feet blocked visions, along a dank path are blocked stronger arms embrace, the weak made stronger torment appears, cloud of black dots torment given over, a cores vision given lost life covered, clouded in a mist lost you captured my core, my core captured you eye full of color, you've given my eye
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Published
Dec 8, 2017
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my first attempt at a shadow sonnet

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