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Breathe

A little pressure's good, makes me feel alive. A spurt, a sucking, a gasp for air. Notice what it's like to draw breath on a glasspane, a fleeting sign of life. Disappears, rises into the sky or falls to the ground, who knows, unstuck from the tangible, an invisible mist, particles from a soul, drifting unhinged. Do they come back? I don't know. Do we lose a little of our soul with every exhalation every sigh of sadness of elation. Something drawn in, openmouthed, gaping. A little fear, of something unknown? All our lives: give a little of ourselves, take a little something else.
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Jul 21, 2012
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Written 12/3/2012

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