But what is a soldier without his gun? A brave little boy, playing makebelieve in his room with a plastic G.I Joe doll, his camouflage inaccurate and too yellow. Plastic sand bag barriers scattering the floor this boy has never learnt a thing of the war. leaving it all up to imagination he takes the tiny plastic radio and calls in, "Mission complete - Commander, we're comming home. Over and out". Creating a fake static noise with his mouth which takes us to a new scene. Accurate camouflage colours this time, the australian flag on his shoulder, but that little boy from his room is now wearing them as a man. A soldier he has become with destruction all around him, he was flown to Vietnam. A high-tech radio for real this time, "Man down! Man down!" One of his unit fell heavy in the mud. 303. slung over our little-boy-from-his-room's shoulder he drags the wounded behind trees and shrubs an act of valour. Though, our little boy did not know, that he'd be wounded too and comming home tomorrow.
Ladies and gentlemen, this is the start of my poem I have to write for school (I have to write a series of atleast 15). If you wish to give me tips on how to improve or extend it, that would be very much appreciated. \ Much love, xoxo.