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Night on Splash Mountain

You pass the flume. You pass the time.

Waiting in line, Reading signs by flickering light

Cozy and vaguely threatening

You may get wet!

A clatter, screams,

a flash out of the corner of your eye

like southern lightning (with no big thunder) down into the bottomless abyss.

 

Based on a movie (not available in the gift shop)-- a retelling by whites

of a story written down by whites

told by black

slaves born South

 

You're a brare, like Rabbit

Prey to Brare Fox

Under the darkness you pass under dim lights that take you back to a time that was, but never way,

Logs that were never trees

Moving through the canal like a slave, sluicing through the swirling sluice

Prettygoodsureasyerborn Prettygoodsureasyerborn

 

No interaction here in the dark outside-inside

Nobody borne dry, bone dry, unbloodied

By water or unclaimed by the canal full of logs which were never trees

Moving like a slave on display for white birds who, smiling blinking singing, extend

their white wings to show you off to their cartoon friends—a conversation

which you can never be in on

though they look at you.

 

And then you dip into dark and doom

Quivering rabbit children cower

--clatter, flash, scream--

You begin to suspect your time is coming

And your log, now defying gravity, leaves you without doubt

 

So, you're trying to find your lauighin place. If only you could. We've

got your laughin place right here.

 

The mouth opens wide for you

A mouth with briar teeth

A flash like southern lightning

And big thunder fills your ears

 

Zippadee-do-dah, Zippadee-ay

Your pain will stick to you like wet clothes as you float, swim in the clear swirls

and back into the dark where there's light and singing alligators.

Zippadee-do-dah, Zippadee-ay

They look at you with mechanically blinking eyes

that cannot see you, another guest—another stand-in

for Braer Rabbit, a character who looks nothing like you but who sings

for you and speaks for you.

Zippadee-do-dah, Zippadee-ay

His voice is high and cloying with a Huck Finn twang and a Shirley Temple cry.

He's relaxing at home and you are wet and he is warm in home's golden light.

Yet he speaks for you, sings for you, but he does not see you.

A cast member made of person who has no lines to speak will pull you from your log.

You will laugh as puddles form at your feet and as you find your

photo—your moment of unbridled, child's

horror now passed, past

 

You'll pass the flume on your way home—clatter, flash, scream--

You're dripping, drying, the salt of the day now washed away

But there's brine in your sensible shoes, squishing between your insensible toes

And making your feet heavy as you leave.

Braer Rabbit is home and cares not for your troubles.

Zippadee-do-dah, Zippadee-Ay

Magic words, shrill, laughing tragic words

You will remember when you look at your souvenir photo

And smile.

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Written by
tom-gunn
American
Published
Jul 9, 2012
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This is part of a cycle in progress of poems inspired by Disneyland.

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