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An Artificial Lake

It's true,

 

*I think you've forgotten

how to skip rocks

so as not to have them*

 

sink

 

*into that murky, swampy

artificial lake that crosses

beneath the railroad tracks.*

 

down

 

*beneath the tracks there is

nothing but muck and a few

corpses weighted with stones.*

 

below

 

*the corpses at the bottom,

their faces twisted with

decomposition, there is*

 

earth's

 

*body for miles and miles, and only

a little patch of Hell deep down.

The rest of it is has seeped onto the*

 

surface.

 

*Just look at the city and talk to the people.

If this is not Hell, and these are not demons

then did we ever really have anything to fear*

 

after all?

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Written by
brad-lambert
American
Published
Jul 6, 2012
Lines·Words
25·114
Notes

Just playing around with words. No clear story here, just imagery.

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