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Jun 2012
The paradox of timelessness and love
which haunts us with a sense of urgency.

It beats with more viscosity than my blood.
It fills my lungs more than oxygen ever could.
I started with the words "a paradox of timelessness and love" and knew I wanted to expand on that idea.  I've been toying with this for hours and I'm hitting the backspace key more than anything else.  I'm asking for your help, a collaborative effort of sorts. Feel free to suggest anything, but I want to keep that phrase intact, and I want to maintain the theme described in the first two lines.  Even if you don't contribute, pass it along and share this so that others may offer their "two cents".  I look forward to seeing the results!
Written by
Dillon
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